deep. i had to actually use the dictionary for some of the words. were u using a thesaurus? :) I miss the coll beach. You get some great ideas there. But more than that, add some pictures to this and keep it on your desktop as a background or something. Because though i have seen a lot of mails telling people the same thing in less articulate ways, very few people follow it through.
The beach usually makes people very contemplative.But it means different things to different people.That aside, a very well written poem i should say! Sums up life,as IT REALLY IS.Its always the journey that counts that matters, there is no "perhaps" to it.check out my blog http://www.imaginenaivety.blogspot.comit also has philosophical tendencies to it :) will write more soon.
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